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mia
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 Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:32 am Post subject: The door |
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The door shut,
And no one knew,
Just an open cut...
Left on the unlucky few.
The door was locked
Like the light within
Left us shocked...
Pricked us like a pin.
A sun's ray passed by,
Joining with the moon's light.
They listned to closed door's cry...
And shone brighter through the night.
One day..The key was found
Unlocking the door,
A musical sound...
Released once more...... |
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Sir Don Capelli
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| Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:46 pm Post subject: wow |
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| not a bad one as far as creativity and imagination is concerned good |
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mia
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| Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 4:28 pm Post subject: |
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| thankyou this poem meant something once upon a time. |
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fredrick
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| Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 4:03 pm Post subject: poet |
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go gal, go be a poet! nice i like it
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